Writer's Hideout - Lesson i - Page 3

Código:

Name:
Birthday:
Age group(teen, young adult, etc...):
Sample of writing(two writings minimum):

When will we start?
As soon as I feel comfortable/have enough members.

What areas will we go into?
Quite a few. Oneshots, fanfics, originals. Chapter composition. Different writing genres like fantasy, fiction and so on. You name it.

Grading?
Even though I will be kind to you, remember that I will be grading everyone to their own strengths and weaknesses. If you feel that I have graded unfairly, do ask me.
The grading system will be as follows:

           - Perfect! I couldn't have done it better!
        - Really good, but I think it could use a few touch ups.
       - Good, but you noticeable errors
     - Your work is interesting, but you need a lot of work
  It's alright, but it isn't near professional quality.

Members?
  Its︎Reina
  Lovelly_girl
  CrimsonIzanagi
  TopazDreams
  
  

Wait! Why are there a limited number of spots?!
Yes, there are a limited number of spots. However, that does not mean that if you join later on, you won't be accepted. The first six students will be accepted immediately, but any after that will have to have a higher quality work to join. I'm asking this as we may be well into our course by the time you join, and I would prefer it to have everyone at the same level.

Who are the teachers?
Currently, only me. If you would like to become a teacher, kindly Private Message me. If you do not know how to access your inbox, click here^^. If I find your work up to par, I'll let you teach here.

Any rules?
Three. Be polite, and follow the forum rules. And absolutely no writing bashing. Period. I don't care if you have a grudge, or are feeling plain nasty, if you need to fight, do it somewhere else.

Ugh, anything else?
I have cupcakes  

Lovelly_girl escribió:A Quick but Drastic Decision..
I still feel his fangs dig into my flesh. I didn’t mind. I am ready to risk my life to help another. I could look into his eyes all day long. I can waste my whole day just thinking about him. I shared my feelings with him, and he did the same. I occationaly quentched his thirst for blood, making his last day turn around and return back from the deep underground land of misery. He showed signs of recovering, and I was happy for it.

Gradually I fell in love with him, but I couldn’t reveal it.  As the days passed, my life went darker and darker. The truth was more horrifying than the devil itself. I’ve realized I’ve made a mistake. A big mistake. I spoiled both our lives. Atleast he has a chance to change nw..
I Know I’m an outcast, and I also know I am not wanted. Why did I ever let him drink my blood? Why did I think he would ever want me?

Thinking about this, I fiddled with my pen. Tears dropped down on the paper. Should I even dare? Yes, I am after all good for nothing.
I began to write the letter, the horrid letter – the letter that I thought I would never ever type in my life. Trembling, I wrote,

“Zero Kiryu,
I’m so sorry for what I’ve done to you. It’s all because of me that you got to suffer like this. I’ve just got to tell you this. I’ve got cancer. The doctors say ther’s no chance of survival. You drunk my blood, so the cancer must have affected you. But not completely. You have a chance to live, and my last wish is just that. Just go for it!
I didn’t Intend for all this to happ.en, and I’m really sorry for it. I can’t handle it anymore. I can’t die like this. I’m using thorny kiss- the knife you presented to me, to kill myself. Please don’t blame yourself. This is my own wish and will. But please save your self.
Bye...
Sweetie Daylight(Or sd as you used to call me)”

By the time I completed, I felt tears form in my eyes. I dabbed my eyes with my sleeve and imediately took out thorny kiss. I stabbed my self, as hard as I can. I was so happy when the knife pierced through my stomach. For a moment, I felt as if I just went into the depths of the world.

Just then someone came in. “Zero..St..stay a...way..away..” I warned him, holding my stomach in great pain. “S-S-Sweetie?” zero said, his voice trembling. He ran towards me. I know he can’t resist the scent of blood- which is why I didn’t want him anywhere near to me.  I was gradually dying. I could feel it.

Zero didn’t give up and still ran towards me. I collapsed in his arms. “I..I’m sorry....” I said, more tears forming in my eyes. Zero came close to my neck. No! He shouldn’t! He just shouldn’t drik my blood! But instead of feeling a slight sting, I could feel tears trickle down my neck. “Z...Zero?” I gasped. But before I could continue, I could feel darkness clossing in, “Why?” I heard Zero say. I couldn’t answer. Just before darkness swallowed me up, I could feel cold lips touch mine.


(Something i wrote a few months back, or was it a year back?I'm not really sure..)