Mino's Poem - 'Friends' - pg 1
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Mino's Poem - 'Friends' - pg 1
"Dance With the Dead"
I arrived at the masquerade in a gown of silk and blood,
donned in a mask of grace to hide my intentions.
For when I leave someone will surely notice
the head of the old master hanging from the chandelier
and will proclaim, "The mistress of death has undone us."
And right they are,
for every night I dance with the dead.
"Icarus"
Soaring the azure skies with wings of twine,
you reached for the sun, your eyes blinded by its light.
It enveloped you in its warmth for a moment
and then you pummeled from heaven.
Your wings gone, your eyes wild.
You drowned in the depths of hell and wailed for help
but no one ventured forth,
for who wants to enter hell?
Your story preserved, your body lost,
heaven and earth weep for you, Icarus.
'Friends' escribió:'Friends'
Call me what you will, friend, buddy, comrade,
I know you don't give three crapps.
For if you did, you would have noticed
the way I'm drowning in my own tears.
I'm gasping for help, yet you avert your gaze.
Why am I always the one running behind you, saving your rear?
And now I'm done with being your lifeboat.
I'm already too punctured to be used, so go find someone else.
I'll be there, in my usual corner.
With my canvas or book,
waiting for the day someone will come,
someone who I will call my 'friend.'
Última edición por xSwimmieX el Sáb Mayo 16, 2015 6:54 pm, editado 1 vez
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They are really smart...it looks like it's been written by a professional
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>///< Thanks! I'm still an amateur though.
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'Friends'
Friends escribió:Call me what you will, friend, buddy, comrade,
I know you don't give three crapps.
For if you did, you would have noticed
the way I'm drowning in my own tears.
I'm gasping for help, yet you avert your gaze.
Why am I always the one running behind you, saving your rear?
And now I'm done with being your lifeboat.
I'm already too punctured to be used, so go find someone else.
I'll be there, in my usual corner.
With my canvas or book,
waiting for the day someone will come,
someone who I will call my 'friend.'
As you can tell, rant poetry. It contained some preeetty severe language in the beginning though, ahah.
I know you may be curious about the reason behind this, well, I'll give you a summarized version:
I finally tried to get out of my shell, and get back together with some old friends. I was getting along well with them until I heard what they had been calling me behind my back. I cried in class, and no one really bothered with me, not even them. I was really angry. I'd been used for the purpose of lending my books out, and bam! I was out of commission. I was so worthless that not even my feelings mattered anymore. And best thing is, I'm back to being friendless! Ahah, I went into ranting mode there.
I wrote a rough version of this in my diary, and I finally felt like copying it down. I hope you don't mind the silly story behind it.
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AMazing! I'm speechless O.O
Omg the last one, there are several people who deserve slamming it in their faces XD seriously, great job!
Omg the last one, there are several people who deserve slamming it in their faces XD seriously, great job!
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Thanks!
Indeed they do.
Indeed they do.
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Hey Pennyy C:
Wow, these are pretty great! I had to read the first one twice before I could comprehend it .-. Not very good at interpreting poems. I:
I really like how you use good vocab but not too many technical terms, which would make it too hard to comprehend the meaning behind the poems. Do the first 2 poems have stories behind them too?
Wow, these are pretty great! I had to read the first one twice before I could comprehend it .-. Not very good at interpreting poems. I:
I really like how you use good vocab but not too many technical terms, which would make it too hard to comprehend the meaning behind the poems. Do the first 2 poems have stories behind them too?
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@Malakk - Thank you!
@Allara - Not that much in particular. Me and my writing friends throw around topics for poems and these two were one of them.
@Allara - Not that much in particular. Me and my writing friends throw around topics for poems and these two were one of them.
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A/N: insp. by the song 'semi-automatic' by twenty one pilots
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once upon a younger time
a person with a smiling face told me to always be true to others
and let my personal and social exterior be the same.
and yet here i am.
to most i appear a charming miss
but oh, how untrue that is!
for when i am alone my true self shows.
it is ugly, with claws of sadness and fangs of reproach.
it drives me insane to look at it.
so i cut off the part of my wretched being where this disease prowls;
my cursed head.
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once upon a younger time
a person with a smiling face told me to always be true to others
and let my personal and social exterior be the same.
and yet here i am.
to most i appear a charming miss
but oh, how untrue that is!
for when i am alone my true self shows.
it is ugly, with claws of sadness and fangs of reproach.
it drives me insane to look at it.
so i cut off the part of my wretched being where this disease prowls;
my cursed head.
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