Role Player Academy ~ Assignment 1 posted

conflictedcolours escribió:Yeah, I can see. It's... choppy. I'll work on the first assignment tonight. We're going to start from the beginning though. Starting with role play making, as that's how I started on the other site.

conflictedcolours escribió:Yeah. Like I said earlier, it's like you took multiple posts and put them together to form one "semi-lit" post. You came to the right place, dearie.   

YAY!! You brought this school over again!!I so wanna improve and I also wanna learn Semi-Lit better...
Username: Mimie
Nickname:M&M (you know,right?  )
Age range:Ummm...Well,10-14...Yeah..
Country: India
Experience:Well,just a year or something...I never knew role-playing back then...
What you are struggling with or would like to improve:I wanna Semi-Lit,and well,I wanna be a better Role-palyer (:
Example of your work: Umm..This is from Josey's RP that I'm in,since this is a School for RPs I thought I should post my example from a RP..

Kayreen "Mimie" Twilight Scarlet escribió:Life is Unfair.
Have you ever had such thoughts?
Wait,stop there,I'm gonna ask you few questions.

Have you ever wanted anything so crazily,but it ends up getting farther and farther away from you?
I have
Have you ever had that thought that you are perfect for the role but you never get?
I have
Do you have a dream to sing in front of the whole world,well,--atleast if it's not sing,just fill up a blank with your dream--but it never gets out of your bedroom door?
I do
And lastly,are you a poor,working 24/7,addicted to music and internet-surfing,thirsty for few drops of education kind of person?
I am

"Okay,what's going on here?" You say.
Hey,what's wrong with a Teenager asking a few questions and-Uh-oh!
Darn! Mom's calling for breakfast.
The answers to the question you've asked have to wait a little longer.


I ran to the small bathroom and quickly brushed my teeth,my shower was just a small bucket of cold water and a small shower at the top.I quickly had to take a shower too....
Life isn't easy in a small rented Apartment.
I went to my closet and threw a Gray t-shirt with a purple butterfly and my Rebel Jeans,as I called them on my bed.You know those short jeans which have tearings and stuff?That's what I call my Rebel Jeans.As fast as I could,I dressed up.

I grabbed my Notebook,a pen and my iPad with the earphones attached already and ran downstairs,then I pulled my seat and sat down and immediately stuffed a earphone into my left ear and blasted some One Direction tunes,I wasn't so interested in them but since my HighSchool's girls were so obbessed with them I wanted to know what they actually were.
"Good Morning,dear" My mother snapped me out of a daydream I was having.
"Huh?Oh,yeah,Good morning" I replied
I placed my stare at my Dad.His nose inside the newspaper,he's a positive and very strong man for all I know.
That's because he's rarely home.Going to work early in the morning and coming really late was his thing.I'd be asleep by the time he was home.No,I wasn't like those other Teen Girls sleeping at 1:00 am or something,I'm not into movies,or boys,or movies.....

My mom placed a plate with bread and egg in front of me.I never ate cereal,I don't even know what it tastes like,you see,I'm not rich,I live with my mom,dad in a small rented Apartment.At first,life like this was crazy and just entering my teens,I usually threw tantrums about not having a Big house with Lots of money.I wanted it,just like the other girls in my School.

If you're to ask people how I am,they'd say just four words: Stay away from her.
Why? Because I'm a very lonely person.I don't even have friends or a boyfriend.I'm a teen rebel,I never put my nose in other's busninesses.I haven't talked to anyone personally since 6th grade.So maybe,Stay away from me.

I shoved food into my mouth,my Mom and Dad didn't mind it cause as usual I was late,but to a Teen Rebel,that's HighSchool life.

conflictedcolours escribió:Accepted!
I see what you need to improve. Your posts are more like a story chapter than an rp post.